From cf30392843377136930c6a18fd9198393dc59234 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Holger Levsen <holger@layer-acht.org>
Date: Mon, 9 Nov 2015 18:53:59 +0100
Subject: reproducible: reword paragraph about the howto

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 bin/reproducible_common.sh | 4 ++--
 1 file changed, 2 insertions(+), 2 deletions(-)

(limited to 'bin')

diff --git a/bin/reproducible_common.sh b/bin/reproducible_common.sh
index babb8f21..11d6b049 100755
--- a/bin/reproducible_common.sh
+++ b/bin/reproducible_common.sh
@@ -201,8 +201,8 @@ write_page_header() {
 		write_page "   so if you are an upstream developer or working on another distribution, we'd love to hear from you!"
 		write_page "   Besides Debian we are also testing <li><a href=\"/coreboot/\">coreboot</a></li>, <li><a href=\"/openwrt/\">OpenWrt</a></li>, <li><a href=\"netbsd\">NetBSD</a></li>, <li><a href=\"/freebsd/\">FreeBSD</a></li> and <li><a href=\"archlinux\">Arch Linux</a></li> now, though not as thoroughly as Debian (yet?) - and there are plans to test <a href=\"$JENKINS_URL/userContent/todo.html#_reproducible_fedora\">Fedora</a> too.</ul>"
 		write_page "   Brand new: <code><a href=\"https://reproducible-builds.org\">https://reproducible-builds.org</a>!"
-		write_page "   <ul>As we think that reproducible builds should become the norm, we have started to write <li><a href=\"https://reproducible-builds.org/howto\">How to make your software reproducible</a></li>. As always we appreciate feedback on this document, just please don't consider it to be finished, comprehensive or correct, yet."
-		write_page "      Also aimed at the free software world at large, but released as version 1.0, is the first specication we have written: the <li><a href=\"https://reproducible-builds.org/specs/source-date-epoch/\">SOURCE_DATE_EPOCH specification</a></li>.</ul>"
+		write_page "   <ul>As we think that reproducible builds should become the norm, we wrote <li><a href=\"https://reproducible-builds.org/howto\">How to make your software reproducible</a></li>. As always we very much appreciate feedback."
+		write_page "      Also aimed at the free software world at large, is the first specification we have written: the <li><a href=\"https://reproducible-builds.org/specs/source-date-epoch/\">SOURCE_DATE_EPOCH specification</a></li>.</ul>"
 	fi
 	write_page "<ul><li>Have a look at:</li>"
 	for MY_STATE in $ALLSTATES ; do
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